What can you say about the adolescence years of your life?
Its something that everyone has to go through, and something that everyone handle in diffrent ways. Some enjoy their adolescent years while others think that its the worst years of their lives. I don't know if you can say that its good or bad, its just something that everyone has to go through in one way or another.
I didn't have any problems during my adolescent years, the only thing I really remember is that I thaugth that some of my classmates was a bit immature. It felt like sometimes they used their age as an excuse to behave badly. Sometimes it felt like they didn't take responsibility for their actions, and that was something that I didn't like. I have always been taught that you should take responsibility for your actions.
Something else that I remember from these years is that I whished I was older. When I was fifteen or sixteen yeras old, I whished I was eigthteen so I could take my drivers licence, and when I was eigthteen I whished I was twenty years old. I don't know why but I didn't want to be seen as a kid, I wanted to be a grown up.
To round it all up I can say this, if the adolescent years of your life is good or bad depends on what kind of choices you make during this period of time.
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Structure: Clear and lucid structure - but do you answer the question? Good conclusion, which ties it all up quite neatly without loose ends.
Language: This is more problematic. For example:
-You have several subject-verb agreement errors ("its the worst years of their lives", "some of my classmates was", "if the adolescent years of your life is good or bad"). You need to work on this.
-Avoid the comma splice (that's when you have two main clauses only separated by a comma, without a coordinateing conjunction - satsradning in Swedish).
-Spelling ("whished", "thaught")
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Hi Hanna,
I like your text. You just come to the point and describe the facts.It outlines very good how the feelings during adolescence are.
Regards Julia
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